Reviews for Tempation
GorgeousBlueSilver chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
I love all the words that begin with t in this, it was so fun and unique to read. And those last three lines, beautiful.

Sorry I took so long to review, you're truly awesome at poetry.
Sarah1983 chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
Wow, I love the alliteration, a beautiful job that flows seamlessly.
Archia chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
I do not think I have ever seen as many words starting with 't' as I did just then. I'm pretty amazed that you could get that many words, and still have the poem make sense. Well done.