Reviews for The Perfect Girl
Milea Kirst chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
Interesting idea...but so short! Why not write a story about her?
Dandy352 chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
This reminds me of a person I know, my best friend. But I keep praying to God to bless her so in Jesus name, she's not suicidal or anything near. It's a good character description you have here. I suggest you write a story about her. :)
HiddenCreek chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Aww.. Yes people have layers that no one sees.. I like how you put that concept here.. a couple of grammar flaws but really who doesn't have them? :) just a little constructive critisism since I can never say anything not positive. Sorry I'm not good at it. I sugarcoat a lot, but really I enjoyed this and it makes me think about peoples walls they put up and how it is very different below the surface :)