Reviews for The City Exists
thestrangebeauty chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
I love this! NYC is my favourite place on the entire planet, at least that I've visited so far. This totally took me back to how it feels right before you fall asleep at night or just before your wake up in the morning - when you hear all of these noises and even though they'd be annoying anywhere else, they're somehow kind of...right in New York. I don't know. But I love this!
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
I love this and think the imagery is good. One thing I would suggest tying this into the immortal poem and creating a story, I think it could work well and you could feed this imagery from both poems throughout the story. Just a suggestion and I loved this poem!
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
This is defiantly my favorite poem!

I love it

Everything is just perfect!

I really love how much vivid imagery you use

Fantastic GENIUS splendid AWESOME!