Reviews for Death of the Immortals
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
I like the concept but I thought it was a little short; you could include some more imagery and explain how the immortals became 'immortal' but then again that's just me! I do like the fact that the underdogs (the livers) win over the immortals. The imagery you used was really clever because I imagined a new world that lived in a toy box.
BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
I never thought of this before, love it!

It kind of reminds me of toy story a little :D

It's bc you compare them to dolls so much...which is very clever

The ending when they die is sad though

Still LOVE IT