|Reviews for So I Won't Matter|
| Sayaxchihiya chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
You do really well describing the siblings, but I think that the main character needs some more fleshing out. You say that she's pretty much invisible, but I think it would be a lot better if you show us that ie. put a scene in t the beginning that demonstrates who invisible she is. That way, the ready will feel more connected to the character. Right now, she seems kind of distant and whiny. By showing the readers exactly why she feels so bad will make her more relatable and likable. It's pretty good so far, though.