| Reviews for Chasing Lavender |
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   ren360 chapter 9 . 7/16/2012 I decided to be the mature, reasonable five-year old I have proven out to be and review your last chapter. Since I was brought up to be a good, honest, respectful little girl, and thus I guess all I can do right now is quote one of the great minds of the 21st century: CURSE YOU, PERRY THE PLATYPUS! With so said, I'll leave you off with a warning: You'd BETTER be back, Missy. And by God you'll go through HELL if you don't. And believe me, this... I don't take lightly. So slump yo heinie back on that pretty little chair of yours and get those fingers moving, girl! 'Cause I'll be watching you... Reeaaaallly closely. Creepyness overload: Check. KEEP WRITTING! Ren360 |
| Devanian chapter 9 . 6/29/2012 O.O -_- TT |
| n255 chapter 9 . 6/29/2012 Just wanted to say thank you for writing all this time. It really has been appreciated. Best of luck with the web comics. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012 I'm very sorry to hear that you will no longer be writing this! But I do understand your reasons. Thank you for your hard work on the part of the story you were able to complete! |
| Devanian chapter 8 . 6/13/2012 Ahh! This was great. :) Updating next week sounds awesome :) |
| BlueKnicksnKnacks chapter 6 . 6/12/2012 Great story! They're a little young to be talking like that, but well-written nonetheless! Can't wait for the next update... they'll be such a cute couple when Jessica gets older! -Fent |
| insomniac895 chapter 8 . 6/11/2012 hahah...poor devin! i can point out few mistakes here but i'm just glad you updated! |
| Lex chapter 8 . 6/11/2012 Gotta add this to my favorites! Update please! |
| Devanian chapter 7 . 5/28/2012 HEllo, I read this story a couple of months ago. I really liked it but I hadn't made an account yet so I could comment or follow this story, but now I can YAY! You're plot seems great! I hope you update soon. :) -Devanian |
| Ali-Kernschatten chapter 7 . 5/27/2012 I do like your writing style, but I think your chapters are lacking a lot, detail-wise. It reminds me a lot of the way I tend to write: as in, just the most important or significant scenes. But remember, real life, unlike dreams, consists of a lot of middle details too. So instead of your characters randomly playing a video game, why not explain why they are both together and playing a video game. Instead of skipping straight to the tombstone, perhaps you should start with that morning and the prince telling Jessica not to come. Anyway, just a thought to help you lengthen your chapters and to encourage you to keep updating! Good luck with your inspiration! |
| Ren360 chapter 7 . 4/9/2012 Wait so what? Is this how they MET? I like this chapter, but I'm a little confused over if this halpened before or after the firs chapter... The chapter sounds fine, don't worry about it! ;) Keep writing! ~ren360 |
| Chola13 chapter 7 . 4/9/2012 This was sweet, please update soon i love this and there is no way he is going break of teh engagament lol xxc |
| Rosalinda Pink chapter 7 . 4/9/2012 This is great so far and please do continue, I'm just kind of confused about their ages... |
| ren360 chapter 5 . 4/8/2012 What about the little brother? D: You disposed of him you villain! I smell murder... |
| ren360 chapter 6 . 4/8/2012 O: YOU FIEND! I HAD NO IDEA YOU'D UPLOADED! OMGOMGOMG I love itt! It's so randomly awesome... I see what you meant in your pm, and I understand. It's awesome and i just CAN. AWT. WAIT. until they're 14! Upload faster! Doodle some moar! anything! You got me HANGIN gurl! Upload. Nao. Helpful as always and as feedbackey as usual, ~Renthreesixteh. |