Reviews for Chasing Lavender
ren360 chapter 9 . 7/16/2012
I decided to be the mature, reasonable five-year old I have proven out to be and review your last chapter. Since I was brought up to be a good, honest, respectful little girl, and thus I guess all I can do right now is quote one of the great minds of the 21st century:


With so said, I'll leave you off with a warning:

You'd BETTER be back, Missy. And by God you'll go through HELL if you don't. And believe me, this... I don't take lightly.

So slump yo heinie back on that pretty little chair of yours and get those fingers moving, girl! 'Cause I'll be watching you... Reeaaaallly closely.

Creepyness overload: Check.

Devanian chapter 9 . 6/29/2012


n255 chapter 9 . 6/29/2012
Just wanted to say thank you for writing all this time. It really has been appreciated. Best of luck with the web comics.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
I'm very sorry to hear that you will no longer be writing this! But I do understand your reasons. Thank you for your hard work on the part of the story you were able to complete!
Devanian chapter 8 . 6/13/2012
Ahh! This was great. :) Updating next week sounds awesome :)
BlueKnicksnKnacks chapter 6 . 6/12/2012
Great story! They're a little young to be talking like that, but well-written nonetheless!

Can't wait for the next update... they'll be such a cute couple when Jessica gets older!

insomniac895 chapter 8 . 6/11/2012
hahah...poor devin! i can point out few mistakes here but i'm just glad you updated!
Lex chapter 8 . 6/11/2012
Gotta add this to my favorites! Update please!
Devanian chapter 7 . 5/28/2012

I read this story a couple of months ago. I really liked it but I hadn't made an account yet so I could comment or follow this story, but now I can YAY! You're plot seems great! I hope you update soon. :)

Ali-Kernschatten chapter 7 . 5/27/2012
I do like your writing style, but I think your chapters are lacking a lot, detail-wise. It reminds me a lot of the way I tend to write: as in, just the most important or significant scenes. But remember, real life, unlike dreams, consists of a lot of middle details too. So instead of your characters randomly playing a video game, why not explain why they are both together and playing a video game. Instead of skipping straight to the tombstone, perhaps you should start with that morning and the prince telling Jessica not to come.

Anyway, just a thought to help you lengthen your chapters and to encourage you to keep updating! Good luck with your inspiration!
Ren360 chapter 7 . 4/9/2012
Wait so what? Is this how they MET? I like this chapter, but I'm a little confused over if this halpened before or after the firs chapter...

The chapter sounds fine, don't worry about it!


Keep writing!

Chola13 chapter 7 . 4/9/2012
This was sweet, please update soon i love this and there is no way he is going break of teh engagament lol xxc
Rosalinda Pink chapter 7 . 4/9/2012
This is great so far and please do continue, I'm just kind of confused about their ages...
ren360 chapter 5 . 4/8/2012
What about the little brother? D: You disposed of him you villain!

I smell murder...
ren360 chapter 6 . 4/8/2012
O: YOU FIEND! I HAD NO IDEA YOU'D UPLOADED! OMGOMGOMG I love itt! It's so randomly awesome... I see what you meant in your pm, and I understand. It's awesome and i just CAN. AWT. WAIT. until they're 14! Upload faster! Doodle some moar! anything! You got me HANGIN gurl!



Helpful as always and as feedbackey as usual,

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