|Reviews for Smitten|
| lovingeditor24 chapter 19 . 7/10/2013
Ummm why have you given up on this story. I gave waited ever so ling fir you to continue. Please update already its been over a year.
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/30/2012
Hi it's Random Reader but you can call me SilenceWhispering24 *cough*myrealaccount*cough*
Yeah so sorry I haven't checked this out for so long but it's getting better. Yes you've improved a lot. Well done and I love the evil uncle. (random fact about me: I judge stories on their villains, not their heroes) Well, keep writing!
(also where do you live? Russia? Japan? Germany? ANTARCTICA?) ha ha no but I'm just curious. •3•
| JJsMommy29 chapter 19 . 6/20/2012
your doing an amazing job on this story so can't wait to see what happens next and to see what happens between Tori and Aidan now that there together so update soon
| PassionPen chapter 19 . 6/18/2012
The stories great :) i just have one question...Is it Kierran's dad who's evil or uncle? or both? because you mention that his uncle is the crazy megalomaniac in this chapter, but in previous chapters, you mention that its Kierran's dad who plotted the plan or whatever. I think you're confusing the two characters or maybe made a mistakes. Perhaps I'm wrong, can you just clear that misunderstanding? Because I'm really confused right now.
| Chola13 chapter 19 . 6/17/2012
WOW! How could keiran do that? awww his uncle is evil! please update soon and i am so touched that you update while being ill that means a lot x and yes your writing has improved, definately. i dont know how to explain ti you can just tell! love this story!
| ChocolateCoveredCheetos chapter 19 . 6/16/2012
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AWESOME! VERY, VERY AWESOME. :D
I basically held my breath throughout the whole chapter. ;) You're a really good writer. :)) If you publish your books one day (which I'm pretty sure you will), I'll be the first one to buy it! The drama was absolutely fantastic. I feel a bit sorry for Kierran, but I guess it had to be done. Oh, and before I go on...
WHY THE CLIFFIE? :O The suspense! Why, why, why?
Lol XD. Anyways, please please please update soon! (excerpts work too *wink wink*) I need to know what's going to happen next! X)
Anyways, see you at school at monday! :) Turtle Hair! Comes in all colors. (Courtesy of Upin and Ipin, lol)
-The person who's trying to make her review longer by adding more words to this and kind of failing because she is running out of things to write. ;)
(Is this longer already? Haha XD)
| MissColly chapter 19 . 6/16/2012
Nooo! Another cliffhanger!
I was just as shocked as Tori when I found out the whole fortune from her granddad thingy.
I was even more shocked to find out that Keirran was part of some sick evil plan! And I really liked him! Still do, but I can't believe he agreed to something like that in the first place. It's gonna take a lot to get Tori to forgive him.
Because there have been huge gaps between every update, I forget the level of writing you produce in every chapter. So I'm sorry but I can't answer your question in detail. But I can say that I enjoyed the earlier chapters just because it was set more in school and I love high school settings for romance. But that doesn't mean your writing hasn't improved since then. I definitely think it has as with every writer but I'm sorry I can't give you specific points where you improved.
| ChocolateCoveredCheetos chapter 18 . 5/29/2012
This story is AMAZING- just like the other one! ;) Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next. :D Aiden and Tori forever! 3 Lol XD Btw, cool evil uncle. Haha. :P
-You Know Who I Am :))
| randombubbles221 chapter 18 . 5/28/2012
i cant wait, i know what you mean. I'm in Australia and we are in a hectic time at school, so take all the time you need. love your story!
| Jalooloo chapter 18 . 5/26/2012
:P Good luck with life and this story is amazing! Can't wait for the next chapter. Also, are you American and how old are you? Sorry if that's a bit personal. If it makes you feel better I'm 13, 14 in November, and Australian... Haha if you don't want to tell me any details could you at least tell me your star sign ;) Just curious; not as curious as I am for the next chapter though XD
| Jalooloo chapter 6 . 5/25/2012
I love this story and a guy at my school is called Curran (Kee-ran)
| mysorryeyescansee chapter 17 . 5/20/2012
Why a cliffie?
| Random Reader chapter 18 . 5/17/2012
First of all I love this story and I can't wait to find out what happens next, second of all that's really strange that you start school in June because thats when my summer vacation starts but Im guessing it has to do with your wether wherever te heck you live in.
| Anushree chapter 18 . 5/15/2012
hey! I liked your story! its one of the few stories that I've come across which I've really enjoyed reading! I can understand the 'Busy' part, all aspiring writers have those busy times...its unfortunate for the readers...looking forward to knowing the mystery of Kierran's father...and more of Aidan...
| Sarah-Nikole chapter 17 . 5/8/2012
Yay, your back!:) This chapter was great, as always:) I can't wait for the next chapter. Ooh and I'm glad your able to post again:))