Reviews for The Grand Canyon
Apollo-the-second chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
it's nice :) i've never visited the grand canyon...yet (if you catch my drift) keep it up!

i love ice-cream! (yeah, i'm a bit of a whack job, if i may say so myself) :)
hgfan4life chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
It's simple but effective. Nice job.
Xhylm chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
That's quite an interesting way to describe the Grand Canyon, it seems peaceful when you mention a river but you describe it as something wild and powerful. Nice work
jj1027 chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
A simple poem, but it serves to describe the canyon.I have been to that river, and I live in arizona so I plan to go bock some day. I will be reading one of your stories later, and reviewing. Please reply to this review to let me know which you'd most like reviews on.
Cows Say Moo chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Land Land Land Thats all u say
Stranger Person chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
so.. hmm.. peaceful.. *contented smile* wish i could write happy poems..haha.. it's beautiful though :D
Luckycool9 chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Wow what a way to describe the crtion of the grand cnyoyn. i felt like i was there.
PirateGuy101 chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Thats creative thinking! I like the way this one flows! Kinda of a cool thing to think about isn't it? Msrvelous job!