Reviews for Kidnapped and Wrongly in Love
Animay Kawai chapter 4 . 12/20/2012
Very nice jobe. Very nice, indeed. But it is in need of some grammar corrections. I don't mean to sound like I am being prissy and all, but I am a complete neat freak.
Mahteslover chapter 8 . 10/20/2012
This story is really good... I think a couple of spelling errors but really good. Please continue and update soon
Loves guilt chapter 10 . 7/9/2012
Keep going please
SightUnseen chapter 8 . 6/28/2012
I thought this was going to be pretty straight forward, but this whole thing with Raven is making it more interesting.

When you swap from one characters perspective to another's, may I suggest that you put their name at the start of their bit just to make it less confusing.
Also, there's quite a lot of typos. It might be a good idea to get a beta reader. I know it's hard to notice your own mistakes sometimes, but, if you send it to someone else to check it, it make the story easier to understand.
KatieNinja chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
ur always inpresing !GET TYPING GIRL!
lmccarty chapter 2 . 1/7/2012
hey. im sure you know who this is right? anyway more chapters! comeon, i know you can do better.
Twitch1995 chapter 5 . 11/28/2011
OMG WHAT WAS HE HIT WITH? graaah, i soooooo wanna knooooow! lolz
Twitch1995 chapter 3 . 11/27/2011
i love your story so far. you have great characters and i absolutely loved how inferno got dirt out from under the blankets. it was funny. this is really good so please dont like give up on it :D