You did the BEST job ever at creating a adorable character Axton is so freaking adorable! I love it I LOVE IT

This was truly lovely to read, it was extremely well written to the point of not going too deep, not making it perfect but true. I would hate to ramble on about all things I liked about it, so let it be said that I enjoyed all the writing, and subtler writer things, very much.

She really is, though she did bring him out of his shell this far, she can do more

Wow, I must say Im impressed. That's quite alot of action to happen in only a few chapters. And that kiss at the end was a really sweet ending. Keep it up!

amazing! i love how you added the idea of them wearing the suits of armor.

amazing! i love how you added the idea of them wearing the suits of armor.

wow a nicotine patch? that is smart

Aww Paige is so bubbly. I like this character.

So is that really Axton, or is it Wyatt pretending to be him so he can get in her pants?

wow he sounds like a dick

That's hilarious, so Axton basically didn't know what a bitch was?

So Axton finally gets it, interesting

you know, i really like how you continued the story with Paige, it;s really interesting

Wow so I started with this story and I have got to say that this amazing. You write very well but I would consider expanding you're vocabulary a bit, like a little nano bit. lol Great story keep going!

Great story. Please keep writing!