Reviews for The Archetype
Drifting Ballad chapter 3 . 12/3/2011
You have a fantastic voice for story telling, and your descriptions are really great! I can't wait to find out what happens next for the characters, and I can't wait to hear more from them as well :) As a quick side note, throwing in so many names can be a bit confusing, so if you had the protagonist get more involved with the other characters one at a time, it would be easier to understand what each person looks like, and who they really are. Anyway though, keep up the writing, because this is awesome! (And the supernatural is something I'm looking forward to very much!)