this Chapter is great! i loved how you opened up on the dream...and that in itself was really intense.. Now I really cant wait until Ch. 8 is posted...! HURRRYYYYYY!

OHHH this is getting good! Carmelo sounds super yummy!

You've done a good job. I'm hooked. A few spelling errors I noticed, but hey, even I have that problem from time to time. Try to update as soon as possible, I want to know where this leads to.

Omg this is the best story I have ever read. It has sooooo much flavor. Great plot. Don't wanna direct the story but I couldn't help but think that if you threw in some infidelity from Byron even though he want to be "loyal", that would add some spice. But just my opinion. It's great. Love it. Want to read more so hurry. This is kameron BTW. Lol I'm sooooo proud of you.!

OMG I'm Glad I read this Chapter! You made Carmello sound extra Yummy! Is Byron mean? Hurry up an Update!

OMFG This first Chapter has me hooked! like I want to know what happened! Yay ForeverTitianna

So chapter two was like really good! I don't even read but I would so by this book and read it all the time! Carmelo sounds really sexy and I think Brielle is going to stay with Brayon and Carmelo is really going after one thing which is sex. I don't know but I predict Carmelo is really a bad person but who knows I can't wait for the next chapters! Very nice ForeverTitianna! :)

Okay the first chapter is simply amazing. How you started the Chapter by capturing the hook of the audience! It was really good.