Reviews for Learning to Breathe |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I can't tell you how much I love this story. Please keep writing it when you can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I lOVE this story! please, keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh you updated! Another amazing chapter... I'm starting to wonder wether I have any bad thoughts for your writing, aha. Looking forward to an update (ahh looks a cutie) ps. Yeah luke is definately my favorite character because he's so sweet and funny and cute xoxo |
![]() ![]() I absolutely love this, update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.o a bit creepy, but good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god this story is breath taking and so full of emotion I love it so much! I love the sister bond between Tara and Lynn. I really like Daven his serious and straight forward attitude makes me laugh lol. I ship LynnxLuke :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think lynn should be with luke. They would be cute together |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Matt! I hope that Lynn dates Luke, but realizes she still has a thing for Matt. I think it's sweet that they both were in love with each other and didn't have a clue. I can't wait for the next update! I hope that Matt and Lynn talk soon. Great writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad you updated! I really wonder how Mart and Lynn's relationship will be in the future and I'm looking forward to her and Luke too! Lastly, Daven's character is probably my favorite just because he's different. I wonder how his relationship with Lynn will be too. Great update (: |
![]() ![]() Reading this makes me feel so sad. I start thinking about my own life and how some things that could really be simple are so complicated, at least to me. This is written so beautifully, it really brings out a lot of emotions in me. Please keep on updating! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay your back! Well done, it's just as amazing as ever. Looking forward to the next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please go write the next chapter right now. |
![]() ![]() When I came across this story I thought 'this should be interesting' and now that I'm caught up I gotta say 'whoa!' I like every single character and the role each play especially the love triangle between Tara, Lynn, Matt and possibly Luke? To be honest I think Lynn and Luke will make a cuter couple than Lynn and Matt. It's just wrong to date the boyfriend...ex boyfriend of your sister in so many levels. And then there's Daven...he's truthfully cruel but I like that's straight forward. In a way he keeps everyone sane haha... I'm looking forward for the next chapter. Please update soon. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love that you're back. Eerily enough your chapter is perfect timing. This almost EXACT thing with Matt and Lynn just happened to me. Minus the twin thing. Update this soon! I'm addicted :) |