Reviews for Whiskey Lullaby
Probie D chapter 1 . 12/15/2011
omg it is so good! haha i'd start crying if my mom wasn't right next to me :P that's a really good songfic! i love it :) really i do, you need to write more of these!

*gets cookies and milk*
Explicitly Simple chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
Their such a beautiful tragic love story. Is this a base off of a song? If so, could you please send me it? Thanks :)
S.Annie chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
I think this was quite good. It moved a bit too fast and was a little short for my liking, but I like how you stayed true to the song (one of my favourite songs!), and it worked.

Also, with this sentence, 'The feeling, crossing his tounge again.' it didn't flow perfectly when I read it, some like 'There was that feeling crossing his tongue again.' would work better. To me at least, but I don't like telling people how to write their own stories, so if you think it sounds fine the way it is who am I to judge?

Anyway, I think it was good for a quick read, all-in-all, well done.

- .W :)
dreamer-13 chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Good. You stayed true to the song, while keeping it fresh.I like this. And, since this is one of my favorite songs...