Reviews for the end
ForeverBehindTheImpression chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
I love the bad and good to this. That even if someone doesn't treat you perfectly, you still miss them. Love's a funny thing. The part about going to the bathroom and vomiting reminded me of something that happened to me the night before my ex and I broke up :/ Loved this. My favourite lines have to be:

"i remember seeing a picture of

your ex wearing the same shirt and every

time i wore it i couldn't help but wonder

if when you looked at me, you saw her."

Keep writing :)
thisaccountisclosedthanksbye chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Really beautiful poem, with lots of little snapshots of memories and emotions, lovely.
if i fall chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
that was...amazing.

i felt so many emotions reading that.

really well done.

thank you for sharing.
cultural chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
this is beautiful.