To answer some of your questions:

1. I think Sapphire and Henry will make a good couple. I mean, they're very close and have known each other since first grade. Also, with Sapphire being the type to laugh easily and Henry funny, they could make a really cute couple! HOWEVER, I was thinking that Sapphire and John could also be a couple, since he also cracks jokes, teases her and Henry (maybe that could be his way of hiding his jealousy), and it's a little less obvious (IMO)

2. As for what I think happened to Ari... who knows ;-p But maybe she was found out to be the murderer of one of their previous cases.

3. I don't actually mind who I get to read the most/least about, as long as it makes the story interesting, progress then I'm good!

4. I don't have a favourite as of yet but I'm kinda drawn to Sapphire(, Star and Ari O_o) for some reason unknown to me...

Sorry for droning on, I hope you don't mind.

Where do I begin? Oh, I like mysteries. They're mystifying ;-) I think this story has a lot of potential. You can put twists and turns and go anyway you like (as long as it makes sense, of course). So many possibilities! That's why I'm going to point out a few things (I hope you don't mind)

1. Commas, commas, commas... I get confused on where they should go myself, but it's crucial that you use them correctly if you want your story to flow well, and be easier to understand.

E.g., "I have no idea but, help me!"

I think it should be: "I have no idea, but help me!"

There are many websites you can go on that will explain how to use commas, your English class even (assuming you're still in school, of course)

2. Grammatical errors and typos. A few of these here and there, so watch out for them.

That's all for now.

PS I'll be reading your next chap.

*grin*

I love it! I want to write something like that. One question is Ari a girl or a boy? My brother names in Ari, if it's a girl he's going be mad! HAHA sucks for him!

Author's Note: this is the prologue. This was just so you could get to know the characters. Also I want to know which one of you reviewers can come up with the best way this victim died.

Hmmm...maybe the victim was found lying in front of his/her doorstep by a passer-by in the middle of the /her head is cracked open and it looks like he/she had slipped and hit the edge of the step but nooo - its murder.

:-) i'd like to see what happens next in your story. I wonder...

Good please continue

I think it has the next chapter instead of an actual chapter could you please do character profiles