Reviews for Our Eden
Eden Green chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
This poem is beautiful. I'm convinced without reading any of your other works to put you down in my alerts. I love the flow and sweetness of it that's not too overwhelming, but has great depth anyway. As for a title, how about 'Our Eden'? I promise this is more inspired by the fact that the garden throughout this poem seems like such a wonderful place, and not because of my name! Well done ha ha!
Juliet Scar chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Ummmmm maybe Love to Deep Red? Red Love Rose? The Bloom of Love? Ummmmmmm... think think thinking... Under Deep Bloom? Under Deep Red? The Red Love Rose? Rose of Lovers? Source of Love? Source of My Love? Love to Source? Sign of Us? Sign of Our Love? Forget-Us-Not? True Love Bleeds Deep Red? I just thought of the first words that popped in my head a put them into titles. Sorry if they're all bad! By the way: LOVED YOUR POEM! YOUR POETRY IS SO AH-MAZ-ZING! Totally a poem that will stick in my head for who knows how long! GREAT JOB! :)