Fluff is good at certain points of certain stories. Good spot here.

Non-con or rape trigger warning in the summary gives advanced warning.

Yaaaay this story was cute too! I really like what you did with this one, what with the nice characters and sexy bits. Though I did notice their relationship happened a bit fast. And there was a reoccurring theme with how your antagonists always do something crazy and then get put into jail (not that that's a bad thing, it's just that it happened in See You Smile too, so maybe you can shake up the conflict a bit in your later stories?). But regardless, you did a lot of good things with this story, and I appreciate you for writing it. Good luck with all of your writing for future stories!

I loved that! Brava!

Hey, girl! Sorry about you not getting published yet, but I'm sure you'll be able to make it eventually.
I'm glad you decided to put this story back, though :).
Don't give up!

Mere mere den er virkelig god

YAY!

awh I'm so sad...I had a tab open for this story for a while and I come to finally read it and it's gone ;{{{{{{{{{ I hope you get published soon!

I feel like I need to read this.

I really really STRONGLY NEED to read this. I've read the first chapter and looked at some of the reviews and saw how many people enjoyed it and the reasons they enjoyed it and I can just tell that it's amazing.

PLEASE. PLEASE let me know if it gets published on Dreamspinner so I can find it and buy it and read it? And if it doesn't, pleeeaaaaseee consider putting it back up? I want it so bad. I feel like this story and the summary and what it suggests is perfect and exactly what I was looking for and I am completely not even exaggerating when I say that I need the experience of having read this in my life.

So... just... lemme know what Dreamspinner does. I'd be happy to support you if they accept it and stuff. I hope they do! But if not please again consider re-posting it because I'm probably going to stare longingly at the lack of chapter two on rainy days for the rest of my life if not.

Oh DS I am so happy for you! Oh my I'm so excited I can't even
Good luck! I'm behind you 2000% :')
I hope everything goes well
Muchhh love!
-Blade

Oh sh*t. That is one ... strange obssessive bro..

Best Prank ever. XD

Wow. This story was wonderful! It was beautiful and sweet and angsty and fun! And your boys were sooo cute together and I just loved them (how could I not?). I love how you narrated the story and how you portrayed the characters. Tristan was just awesome! And Danny was so cool. And the way you described their relation was so great. And their friends were amazing. I really REALLY loved the story; I think it was very well written and realistic and I couldnt stop reading it.
Thanks for sharing it. Wont you be writing some more about them?

Ok, I LOVED this chapter.

I looooved this fic wheres the sequel!? Omg