Reviews for City of Shame
Eden Green chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
There is a somewhat awkward flow in the beginning, but the last part flows amazingly. Seriously, well done!

'The poeple here don't know what it's like

To finally admit what you're feeling inside,

With their hearts chained up and made of stone,

Always feeling like you're so alone,

Living in the City of Shame.'