Reviews for Wonderland
Eden Green chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
I like this. It's quite short which is fine, however I would suggest two lines to be tweaked a little bit, for ex. it could be 'Entering the realms of my mind...' 'I go deeper and deeper into my wonderland.' All I've done is shortened the length of the lines as examples, for how the lines could have an easier flow. Well done!