|Reviews for Something Blue|
| Pathway chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
I enjoyed this, overall. I like the imagery and the flow of the first five lines especially.
While the connection between
"and a penny for those thoughts, I know keep your dreams at bay" certainly works, the transition/flow from one line to the next feels rough.
You may wish to consider a little more description for, "that June day."
Thanks for the read