Reviews for HaChiKuni
vigorouslydenyingeverything chapter 2 . 12/3/2011
too short but makes readers interested in continuing the story. But dont make them wait too long or you'll lose them...

Oh and maybe you should spice up your summary a bit. Though i'm not good at summarizing either bu i think you'll get more readers by a much more interesting summary.
vigorouslydenyingeverything chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Short yet a god start. keep it up.