|Reviews for The Charity Chronicles|
| demonbarber14 chapter 33 . 3/2
Too bad she got caught, but at least it's highly doubtful that Inga will tell Lady M. I do like Greg, and I hope that Charity won't be led too far astray by the "important men" she's going to meet. I feel like it's important for her to stay grounded with people like Greg and Inga, and not get too caught up the glamorous world she's in. Reading about that delicious soup made me so hungry!
| earthday chapter 33 . 3/1
What a great little chapter! I loved how you wrote Charity's conflicting thoughts about Greg after their little encounter, and Inga's words of advice to Charity - I love their relationship, it's really interesting to read :) And Charity's cheekiness is always amusing!
| lilypad82 chapter 32 . 2/1
perky little no-no's made me laugh lol and love how the shredder is like an animal.
| sweetladyjane2012 chapter 32 . 1/31
I like the way you use a lot of adjectives and descriptive language so that it's easy to 'see' in your mind what's going on, and it makes the characters seem more in depth as well...
| Veronica Fay chapter 32 . 1/30
Hi! Great chapter! I like how Charity day dreamed :)
| earthday chapter 32 . 1/29
What a great new chapter! I loved Charity's cheeky, naughty side when she was thinking about Greg - I'll be interested to see how that develops! Their banter was so cute! I really liked her thoughts about the shredder too and the comparison to a wild animal! Interesting to hear Greg say that Charity is Lady Margaret's number one girl too - great chapter title by the way - I liked how it could refer to Lady Margaret's opinion of her but also how she wants Greg to see her as well!
| demonbarber14 chapter 32 . 1/28
First of all, I loved those first few paragraphs where she was having to do all that mindless busy work while daydreaming about zoo animals. Very realistic! I'm also glad Greg's back! Things are starting to heat up between them...
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| earthday chapter 31 . 12/14/2013
Great new chapter! I loved that line at the end about Charity wanting to salute Lady Margaret. I thought that revealed a lot about parts of their relationship! You convey a lot in so few words which is great! I was also happy to see more of Inga - she's such a fun character! :)
| demonbarber14 chapter 31 . 12/8/2013
Everything's going so well for Charity! I really like this trend! On top of everything else, she's able to work the shredder. It would be dreadful if she lost even a little bit of "the lady"'s new respect for her over a paper shredder!
| lilypad82 chapter 30 . 11/19/2013
Aw what a nice alluring fellow! Shame on Lady B always typing away on her computer. I love the chess pieces and the man as well. feels like I'm watching Beauty and the Beast! :) nice chapter!
| demonbarber14 chapter 30 . 11/11/2013
Danger and mystery indeed! I am very suspicious of this Edgar person. There is something vaguely sinister about him, heightened by the fact that chess related dialogue automatically sounds like double entendre. It was really very silly of her to trust him with all that personal information, but there is always something irresistible about attractive, older, British men.
| earthday chapter 30 . 11/11/2013
Wow, I loved that last line! What a great way to end the chapter! :)
It was so nice to see a more relaxed side of Charity in this chapter as well but at the same time, you gave a great impression of something darker and more dangerous happening. I'm not sure what to think of Sir Edgar so far - there seems to be more to him than meets the eye and I think Charity will have to be careful around him!
| earthday chapter 29 . 10/15/2013
Great new chapters! Just caught up on the ones I somehow missed as well! :) Ah, I like the addition of a new boy on the scene for Charity! She deserves affection after all her hard work I think! And Greg sounds very interesting, though I don't know whether to trust him or not yet! It'll be good to see where this new party she's at goes to - I love how you described her feeling out of place and swamped amongst all the adults! But I think she can handle it, after all she's been through! :)
| demonbarber14 chapter 28 . 9/10/2013
Hurrah! A new chapter! Part of me really wants Charity to go to the party; she went to so much trouble finding it, she'll get to spend more time with the handsome, fun Greg, and it just seems like it would add a bit of excitement to her life! On the other hand, I don't think Inga would approve, and I just KNOW she would somehow find out. It's a tough call...
Anyway, this chapter is as excellent and adorable as always!