The characters were believable and the emotions kept me involved throughout. I think it would look great in a comic book format, and I'm anxious to bring it to life.

Thank you for sharing this amazing piece. I look forward to hearing more of your stories.

Warm regards,
Addy.

Please publish your work on NovelStar. For sure a lot of readers will love your work. There are also a lot of talented writers in the platform that you might want to work with.

This is really good so far!
Keep going, I really like it! ;)

I love this but just have one question... if shes supposed to be poor, why does she have $5000 and how can they afford chocolate syrup and pancakes? By poor is it supposed to mean not super rich? As I can tell that there's a massive discrepancy between them, but from this chapter's description I would in no way label her as poor. I just wondered, thats all.

The characters are great in this, I can't wait to see how Mr. $5000 alarm clock takes to her! :D

Oh my god...actually i would say it was just sweet candy melting in my mouth while reading the last part...waah Perfect Romeo and Juliet...I love love haha...new changes? Really? I think it complete..i hope nothing will go wrong with Rane and Misty if so...i will brust in tears..hehe..

Oooooh so sweeeet Rane...i didnt knew he so innocent knowing nothing about even christmas tree...hehe Now irritating guy is change to good one...seem falling for commoner Princess kkkkk I just dont get it why title is Dont Touch me...hmmm is not allowed to touch...stupid guess ..lets start reading again...nowwwwwwwwwww hahaha

Lol i hardly can guess who aunt flow? Awww...poor Rane... xDD

Haha I do feel special..Gomawo(thank you) kekeke...its getting ineresting more...but really this guy is kinda irritating but i like xD

lovely. very harry potter-esqe with the marriages and kids.

Wow, I love teh chapter titles!

Awesome character development. You have quite a voice for someone so young!

O.O I absolutely LOVED this

You are an amazzzzing writer, you just are soo good! I love this story!

I just couldnt stop reading this story and when i finished, i got the same feeling i got when i finished reading the harry potter novels!

There was so many cute and sweet moments in this story! I absolutely loved it so much and I wished it had been longer. You are an amazing writer and this story was just so perfect and it made my day. Thank you so much for writing this! :)

there are no words that can describe my feelings for this story...sooooooooo before i write a 10,000 word review about this i should control myself and just say three words instead...I LOVE IT~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~.