Reviews for Don't Touch Me!
HeyCharles chapter 1 . 5/2
Please publish your work on NovelStar. For sure a lot of readers will love your work. There are also a lot of talented writers in the platform that you might want to work with.
Ella chapter 1 . 12/5/2018
This is really good so far!
Keep going, I really like it! ;)
LostCriesofTime chapter 1 . 3/22/2016
I love this but just have one question... if shes supposed to be poor, why does she have $5000 and how can they afford chocolate syrup and pancakes? By poor is it supposed to mean not super rich? As I can tell that there's a massive discrepancy between them, but from this chapter's description I would in no way label her as poor. I just wondered, thats all.

The characters are great in this, I can't wait to see how Mr. $5000 alarm clock takes to her! :D
annayh44 chapter 16 . 10/14/2014
Oh my god...actually i would say it was just sweet candy melting in my mouth while reading the last part...waah Perfect Romeo and Juliet...I love love changes? Really? I think it complete..i hope nothing will go wrong with Rane and Misty if so...i will brust in tears..hehe..
annayh44 chapter 8 . 10/14/2014
Oooooh so sweeeet Rane...i didnt knew he so innocent knowing nothing about even christmas tree...hehe Now irritating guy is change to good one...seem falling for commoner Princess kkkkk I just dont get it why title is Dont Touch me...hmmm is not allowed to touch...stupid guess ..lets start reading again...nowwwwwwwwwww hahaha
annayh44 chapter 7 . 10/14/2014
Lol i hardly can guess who aunt flow? Awww...poor Rane... xDD
annayh44 chapter 3 . 10/14/2014
Haha I do feel special..Gomawo(thank you) kekeke...its getting ineresting more...but really this guy is kinda irritating but i like xD
Guest chapter 15 . 11/28/2012
lovely. very harry potter-esqe with the marriages and kids.
Guest chapter 14 . 11/28/2012
Wow, I love teh chapter titles!
Guest chapter 10 . 11/28/2012
Awesome character development. You have quite a voice for someone so young!
DeadlyKitten2021 chapter 15 . 10/25/2012
O.O I absolutely LOVED this
CubiaK chapter 15 . 10/16/2012
You are an amazzzzing writer, you just are soo good! I love this story!
MissColly chapter 15 . 5/20/2012
I just couldnt stop reading this story and when i finished, i got the same feeling i got when i finished reading the harry potter novels!

There was so many cute and sweet moments in this story! I absolutely loved it so much and I wished it had been longer. You are an amazing writer and this story was just so perfect and it made my day. Thank you so much for writing this! :)
luv2read1999 chapter 15 . 4/7/2012
there are no words that can describe my feelings for this story...sooooooooo before i write a 10,000 word review about this i should control myself and just say three words instead...I LOVE IT~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~.
Carson's-girl chapter 15 . 2/25/2012
I love your stories. I was intending to review the chapters individually, but just couldn't stop reading. Before I praise your story, as is inevitable, I have one criticism. You should proof read your work a couple of times, I noticed that there were several spelling mistakes, but thats just me!

I loved the context of the story, a lovely alternative star-crossed lovers tale. The characters were perfect, and I have to say, I would marry Rane! He's just amazing! You have a beautiful penmanship. How old are you? You seem to write at such an advanced level. I can't wait to read another of your stories. Would you write another romance story, I love the way you have the characters interact and have an unusual personal relationship with each other.

The subplot to the story was wonderful, too. What an interesting interpretation of a screwed up family! No-one seems to tackle the weird family issues.
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