Reviews for Everything Can Change
SkySketcher chapter 2 . 12/2/2011
Bravo. I like how you're instantly developing the characters and the soon to be conflicts. I love this idea also, completely original. This could make an amazing novel, please please continue. But geese Eric, lighten up! heh, poor Elle
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Really good you should defiantly continue.

Were you trying for blood-curdling? Because you spelled curtling. and one suggestion is change the blood-curdling completely. Change it to something less... used. I don't know how to word it.

over all good job. :)
SkySketcher chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Wow, that was short. But wow, right when I finished I was screaming, "Wheres the rest?" seriously, as a first attempt its epic. It may not be my place to say such, but you should definitely continue this. I want to know what happens!