You need to upload (as you haven't for quite a few months)! I love this story so far, and you need to continue. You left it off at too big of a cliffhanger to just stop writing it!

Archer is awesome :D

Gosh you write really good! I simply love Zane! Why does he remind me of Hatsuharu from fruits basket? Please update! I demand that you update! procrastinator or not!

Other things:

Can Zane kill people with his glare? especially when he's extremely angry?

i loved the details you gave on Archer and Zane's fight. It made it seem really vivid. Well done! :)

you are an amazing writer, but you neeed to update!

ive got one two-syllable word for you, UP_DATE!plzz?

I love the names they're all so creative! I can't wait for more! ;)

I really love this story! I think it's going to be my new obsession! haha. I'll definitely be sticking around!

Okay, forget what I said before. I hadn't read enough and didn't know Zane well enough to be judging him. He is a brilliant character actually. Yukito is my favorite actually. I loved his enthusiasm to go to the fair with Harmony. I still haven't finished, but I can't wait to!

okay, so I just started this, and I think that it is a really cool idea. I just have one, not even complaint, but rather an issue. Zane seems almost... I don't know, he seems almost in-human in his lack of empathy. And I know that a lot of that is his character because thats who he is, and thats a good character trait for a person in that situation. But I think that it maybe gets carried a little too far sometimes. Like, apart from Yukito he has no feelings about anyone. He doesn't even rant about hating his horrible father. I am sure that a lot of this is because he doesn't admit it. And denial also makes sense from someone in his situation, but we are glimpsing inside his head, so maybe we could have a peek at something that might imply he isn't as disconnected from the world as he'd like us think. And i don't mean that he has to say that he secretly loves everything, but maybe he could talk of hating things. He never says that he hates the gangs either.

I don't know, maybe I am just stupid, and I haven't read the whole thing yet. that's just what I saw. but maybe he's supposed to be that way.

feel free to ignore me, I was just offering my opinion. I really like the idea of this story, but I find it very hard to understand Zane. But my opinion doesn't really count for anything, so you write your characters exaclty as they present themselves to you in your head. I'll keep readaing!

Hhahahahah, nice way to end this with a cliff hanger!

Good job, i cant wait to read the next chapter!

so plz write some more

ok thnx

great job, keep it up! :)

Whoaaa nice twist on the ice thing. I'm still really curious on what happened. Can't wait to read more! :D

ahmazing chapter, please update soon pretty plzzzzzzzzzzzz

Epic-ally amazing!

Plz updatteee