|Reviews for Best Served Cold|
| VampireLuv16 chapter 2 . 2/23/2012
funny ending about it being a snowman.
| J112011 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Wow. You sure did surprise me with the ending, because for a while I was thinking wtf? Nice twist!
Other than that, I was saying "sh*t" by the time I got to the paragraph "Why would they make me take those pills." This hits closer to home than you can imagine, for a variety of reasons that I don't want to explain.
It's interesting how you show that someone's love and acceptance helps endure the bad things in life, but then of course the reaction to what came next (the pain of being left), is well done too.
I wonder for how many people, especially teens "You could not be betrayed by those you never trusted." becomes a motto.
Nice writing overall. Gotta check out some more of your fiction.
| Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
I read this one twice now, and the quite sarcastic twist at the end still makes me smile. Kinda like this!
I can sort of see your personal experience behind this. The sorrow, the wrath at the world in general - well conveyed. Kudos for this work! Hope you keep writing (:
| lanflan2 chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Wow...really bizarre...but I like it. Nice writing :)