Reviews for Leviathan!
Guest chapter 15 . 7/30/2012
update soon please i really love your story don t leave it like this without a ending, so please update for your fans
xxDarkQueenxx chapter 15 . 7/29/2012
Oh , my, goodness. The biggest cliffhanger. You just had to do it didn't you?
xxDarkQueenxx chapter 7 . 7/29/2012
I like almost all of it. The only part that I dislike is the fact that the heros and villains are too stereotypical. I also dislike that that the villains won't cuss. I get that the heros like being perfect, but the villains seem like they would take evil in any form they can get. I also dislike that you make Kraken and Levi seem like the most evil villains, yet the most evil they do is rob a bank. There are humans that are more evil than that, and it makes the story sound like it came from a comic book. I think it's a little childish for the T rating, except for the scattered curs words.
Httw chapter 15 . 7/28/2012
HOLY CRAP! My sister sent this to me because it was "good enough to share"-the highest regard from her if there ever was one! And she rarely reads things that are unfinished-I thought I might pop from that cliff right there!

This is written so well and even though it's a little painful seeing how incompetent Levi and Kracken can be, I adore the story you've created! I find myself really liking Rage too even if he's being an asshole at the moment, I only hope he gets a happy ending too. I cannot Wait! For the next chapter!
hotaru89 chapter 15 . 7/27/2012
I love this story so so so much! You have no idea. Im constantly smiling while reading. After reading 15 chapters straight this is the worst cliffhanger haha I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Anxious to see what will happen next! Great job on this story, I love it ;)
Guest chapter 15 . 7/25/2012
i love your story so much. the brotherly bond between levi and kraken is so sweet .
Guest chapter 15 . 7/25/2012
i hope you update sooon!
Guest chapter 15 . 7/24/2012
:O That has to be the nastiest cliff hanger ever! Oh my god they know they KNOW! Oooo this is exciting!
kati'mtl chapter 15 . 7/21/2012
Oh shit. This story is getting more and more awesome by every chapter. I'm still not a big fan of Troy and him together with Levi, but I do find him a necessary character. But I'm very fond of Volt. And Kraken; I love Kraken. Also, obviously Levi.
Can't wait to read more! What a cliffhanger...!
Oshini chapter 15 . 7/18/2012
GAH! Cliffhanger! Noooo! AAHH, I want to know what happens! I have been WAITING for this moment when Leviathan is found out. Update soon!
The Green Eye chapter 15 . 7/17/2012
Oh my god! How could you have stopped it there? I'm literally bouncing in my seat wanting to know what'll happen next! Haha that was a freaking awesome chapter! I hope you update soon :)
Guest chapter 15 . 7/17/2012
... -gaping- THATS JUST PURE FREAKING EVIL! OMG! Please tell me you're going to update soon! omg what happens next? HOLY SHIT! I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! 3
Guest chapter 15 . 7/16/2012
Yessss. Just yesssssss to this story. I am so happy I found it. Oh god the summary sounded so cute, I couldn't resist. And then I read it, and Troy is pretty annoying, but he's cute, leviathan is cute, kraken is so endearing, andandand so many things. I loves it. Yes to everything.

Except this chapter. No to Levi dying up. Ohohoh and I totally know volt wants Kraken's ass. I've been reading too much porn to overlook this, and if he doesn't, then you're just wicked D:
Guest chapter 15 . 7/16/2012
(dances on tiptoes as if needing to pee)

omggg can't wait for the next chapter. can't wait

Anon-i-mous chapter 15 . 7/16/2012
Gah what a place to end :(
but it seems so good, this was definitely a welcome chapter and was thoroughly enjoyed
thank you so much for sharing
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