|Reviews for Leviathan!|
| asf chapter 14 . 5/27/2012
"You could have been tricking us. You could have planned all of this from the start. We had to make sure you weren't pretending.
pft Triton is too full of himself. from what i remember Triton was the one who couldn't keep away from Levi *chuckles*
| Anon-i-mous chapter 14 . 5/26/2012
On a whim I decided to double check this story and was pleasantly surprised to see an update.
This story is so good and well written and it's just so much fun to read and at times it really does seem like something out of a comic book
Thank you so much for sharing and I would love to read more.
| DH L'Orange chapter 14 . 5/22/2012
awww that ending is both cute and sad at the same time
| Gray27 chapter 14 . 5/21/2012
I honestly can't decide if Troy is a total creeper or just really dense and way too nice...
Anyway, this story is hilarious. One of the best I have read on fictionpress, and I eagerly await the next update!
| Chibikodo chapter 14 . 5/21/2012
Really Troy, are you that dense? Haha Will Levi really be able to make it out to tell his brother if the goal of the superhero training or whatnot is to make him 'grow' into his super powers? I can't wait for the next chapter!
| vipera.422 chapter 14 . 5/21/2012
I can't wait to find out what exactly is going on between Volt and Kraken and what happened to the old Leviathan.
Levi is a great character and his relationship with Troy is really interesting.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
| plix chapter 14 . 5/21/2012
I was starting to get worried this had been abandoned, whew. Great update! I love the how villaincon is just everyone bragging haha.
| Kidiu chapter 14 . 5/20/2012
Poor Levi, but he was able to completely convince everyone, right? This ought to be good. I'm wondering what will happen when Kraken starts wondering where his brother is?
| salthegemini chapter 14 . 5/20/2012
Yay! I am so glad to see an update! I was afraid you had abandomed Leviathan! for you other stories and I was so sad. This was a great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens at Villiancon and I'm sure that Kraken isn't going to be too happy when Levi doesn't show up for a few days.
| Vahinepapaya chapter 14 . 5/20/2012
A new chapter ! I've been checking everyday just for this glorious moment. Thank you for updating. Levi is still the best ! ... even in orange spandex. I had the dubious pleasure of picturing a crossing between Maito Gai and Naruto's clothing.
I wonder how long it'll take before Levi wants to kick Troy's muscled ass because sometimes, he's so annoying ! And Dee seems to know more than she lets on. Oh some depth ! I'm starting to like her but Krakken is still #2 on my favourite list. If you ever try a poll, I wonder about the results.
| ricemidget chapter 14 . 5/20/2012
so exciting! i wonder how levi is planning on getting out of this predicament XD
| Jane chapter 14 . 5/20/2012
YAY! You finally updated, and it was as amazing as usual.
I liked how the heroes didn't trust him fully.
| Guest chapter 14 . 5/20/2012
I'm getting so excited!
| C chapter 14 . 5/20/2012
Great story Rough Draft. Whenever I see the title "Leviathan!" I read instead "The Bumbling Misadventures of Leviathan!" instead. XD Poor guy can't get a break, but his feisty antics are what make him so amusing of a character.
| naomi chapter 14 . 5/20/2012
Ohh thank you so much for updating!
Aiii so :S about the ending! Triton trusting Levi now... and Levi continuing to lie...
So excited to read about the rehabilitation part because I instantly thought of Volt and Kraken :3 I hope I'm not mistaken!
I sometimes skim the comments and one detail that had bugged me earlier but that I pushed to the back of my mind was the whole heroes not touching villains, or else they'll know their villain identity. I've always ineffectively pushed at that idea but OMGGGGG...what if Triton DID know and he's not as dense as portrayed!:D
the VillainCon idea is just so terrific and pretty much adorable, even though the fan-goers are all supervillains.
I also love that Firea is so kickass. More often than not, females in slash fiction are portrayed as weak, whiney, or non-existent.
(I also hope that Dee can have a happy ending... :/ She's decommissioned so it's not that they can't end up together, it's that Firea doesn't want to, which can change...hopefully...)
the changing scene... HOT! ;D