Reviews for Leviathan!
Mattacut chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
1st: FUcking great story, seriously. Even though Levi is an easily manipulated pissbaby like, 24/7 (sorry bro), I really love what you've done with the concept of heroes/villains.
2ns: Now Volt and Troy are starting to act just a lil bit creepy about Levi and Kraken. I think I sort of liked it when the villains were in control? Because like... They never captured heroes and forced them into a 'rehabilitation' program and it kind of reminds me too much of shitty things like those religious programs parents force their kids into... I don't know. It is rubbing me the wrong way. Maybe it's only because I would have been scared of Volt/Troy at this point, instead of still trying to manipulate them when it obviously wasn't working.
I'll probably re-read this in the meantime while you work on the next chapter. Perhaps it isn't as scary as I thought?
Guest chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
Willowtm chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
Ah, what a beautiful day this is! An lovely lovely update! Hm, so THAT'S how it happened. More like Kraken feels like he killed his brother than actually killing him. That poor thing. I guess that explains his extreme protectiveness of Leviathan. And so glad they aren't trying to kill each other anymore... Well, those heros better not expect them to be so submissive, haha. Can't wait for the next chapter!
hpstrangelove chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
Great update! I really love this story.
marginal-utility chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
Too bad there's no hot scene at the end of the chapter! What's gotten into sweet Troy?
Marie Starr chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
Go Troy, finally you grew a pair but hopefully nothing too serious is going to happen to Levi and Kraken. Thank you for updating! It seemed like such a long time that I feared you stopped writing it. Thank you! I look very forward to the next update! Hopefully Levi will realize his feelings for Troy. What happened to Rex?
Mewenn chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
The plot thickens. For the sake of their swelled heads I hope Kraken and Levy can find a compromise and not just give in. It'd be more fun if the power of these relationships was a little more evenly distributed. Also there is trust to work on anyway since Troy now realises he was being somewhat manipulated.
On a side note, I wonder if Levy should be a bit warry of the angry god with a tendency to self-harm that lives inside him (that "I am a GOD" power-trip felt really nice by the way, I could really feel the anger and it really fit and was quite rewarding for the time it lasted).
This story is still great and I look forward to the next chapter. It's really nice to have you back.
Jen chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
Thank you so much for Updating, I seriously love this story and am very curious how itll continue
Guest chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
I am delighted that this is continuing! Strange when I haven't thought of this story in a while a new chapter is already up! I'm glad it wasn't going to end with death (I'm assuming Lev and Ken were going to die or an ambiguous cliffhanger and epilogue there if you ended it with that chapter how you intended to, originally) this will be a good read, seeing how they deal with the rehab thing. Wish you luck in further writings!

Oh and not sure if this was on purpose but in a previous sentence you said 'Villains' instead of 'Heroes' where Levi was laughing at the idea of Troy and Volt making then into "housewives".
Guest chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
i really love leviathan, please update, i cant wait to see what is going to happen next, so please update
Mandy S. Bryan chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
great finally an update! good chapter and hope you update soon
Guest chapter 20 . 2/2/2015
This has definitely been a very intriguing story! I have enjoyed reading it immensely. It would be amazing if it updated, but even if it doesn't, the time I have spent reading it were definitely worthwhile.
LeviathanFan chapter 20 . 1/30/2015
Please update! we're all excited for this
Madbutterfly chapter 20 . 1/27/2015
Omg! Come on! It's been almost a year! Holy shit! Please! Please! Please! Update! Update! Update! I can't taje this waiting anymore! I want to know what happens! Think of all your readers who died last year not knowing what happens and to the other readers who may die in 2015! Please update by March ! Otherwise I will just have to conclude your dead and then go all practical Magic on your ass and raise you from the dead!
LoveAntiquity chapter 20 . 1/18/2015
How can you leave it there!? That's just mean! I mean really, Leviathan's about to kill his brother and you just stop writing? Gosh darn RoughDraftHero! The cruelty!

Maybe a little over-dramatic? I really like your story :) Please finish it?
Yours, Lara

(My account name really is 'LoveAntiquity' if you feel like replying to me little outburst) :)
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