Reviews for Leviathan!
videl chapter 21 . 2/14/2015
To FightsWithBears
come on, neither Kraken nor Leviathan were really that committed to villainy and I doubt that during the rehabilitation they will be treat them with electricity while showing pictures of villanous deeds
videl chapter 21 . 2/14/2015
So happy to see a new chapter! I like where this is going, uh huh "poor" Levi and happy me:) can't wait to see what you are planning next
Damien-Rose chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
:D happy to see another chapter :D
MiranDuranDa chapter 21 . 2/13/2015

I can't tell you how excited I was to see that this was updated. I'm so glad it wasn't a victim of permanent writers block. I adore Levi . I used to adore Levi and Trent together, but honestly? Right now I'd rather see Levi get back his status as Master Manipulator so it's not such a one sided relationship. I hate it when one partner holds all the cards and the other barely even had another viable option besides staying with them. Too much like subtle domestic violence, you know?
Anyways, I can't wait to see what happens!
Guest chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
rly down for boy scout volt to top thickskulled kraken tbh
chibikodo chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
Hooray an update!

Also the original Leviatham's reason for dying.. and way of dying. Quite comical and lame but also sad.

Kraken's rationale for his halfbaked 'villainous schemes' was sweet. :) I am trying to imagine a little tadpole or guppy sized Levi... hee

Rage needs a kick where the sun don't shine for being a d-bag.

I get the feeling that Levi bit off more than he could chew, but certainly Volt is more cunning than Troy.
Guest chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
Mattacut chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
1st: FUcking great story, seriously. Even though Levi is an easily manipulated pissbaby like, 24/7 (sorry bro), I really love what you've done with the concept of heroes/villains.
2ns: Now Volt and Troy are starting to act just a lil bit creepy about Levi and Kraken. I think I sort of liked it when the villains were in control? Because like... They never captured heroes and forced them into a 'rehabilitation' program and it kind of reminds me too much of shitty things like those religious programs parents force their kids into... I don't know. It is rubbing me the wrong way. Maybe it's only because I would have been scared of Volt/Troy at this point, instead of still trying to manipulate them when it obviously wasn't working.
I'll probably re-read this in the meantime while you work on the next chapter. Perhaps it isn't as scary as I thought?
Guest chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
Willowtm chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
Ah, what a beautiful day this is! An lovely lovely update! Hm, so THAT'S how it happened. More like Kraken feels like he killed his brother than actually killing him. That poor thing. I guess that explains his extreme protectiveness of Leviathan. And so glad they aren't trying to kill each other anymore... Well, those heros better not expect them to be so submissive, haha. Can't wait for the next chapter!
hpstrangelove chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
Great update! I really love this story.
marginal-utility chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
Too bad there's no hot scene at the end of the chapter! What's gotten into sweet Troy?
Marie Starr chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
Go Troy, finally you grew a pair but hopefully nothing too serious is going to happen to Levi and Kraken. Thank you for updating! It seemed like such a long time that I feared you stopped writing it. Thank you! I look very forward to the next update! Hopefully Levi will realize his feelings for Troy. What happened to Rex?
Mewenn chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
The plot thickens. For the sake of their swelled heads I hope Kraken and Levy can find a compromise and not just give in. It'd be more fun if the power of these relationships was a little more evenly distributed. Also there is trust to work on anyway since Troy now realises he was being somewhat manipulated.
On a side note, I wonder if Levy should be a bit warry of the angry god with a tendency to self-harm that lives inside him (that "I am a GOD" power-trip felt really nice by the way, I could really feel the anger and it really fit and was quite rewarding for the time it lasted).
This story is still great and I look forward to the next chapter. It's really nice to have you back.
Jen chapter 21 . 2/13/2015
Thank you so much for Updating, I seriously love this story and am very curious how itll continue
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