|Reviews for Leviathan!|
| ricemidget chapter 9 . 1/14/2012
this story is just too funny! i love it!
| poppendol chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
Found your story through the review on the slashpile. And I'm enjoying it greatly. Thanks and keep it up
| Tasselcat chapter 9 . 1/13/2012
This whole story makes me :D. And you update so regularly, I'm impressed and gleeful about it.
How dense is Troy, really? I thought he figured it out three chapters ago. *facepalm*
And the deal with Kraken and Levi - they don't seem as close as Volt is making them out to be. They're not Sam and Dean Winchester close, so I don't quite get the 'no room for anyone else' line, but I can understand the sentiment. Especially coming from arch-nemisis-no-really-I-mean-it Volt. ;) Subtext!
All in all, wonderful job, Levi is my favorite (which is good because clearly everyone wants him), and I look forward to further installments.
To lazy to login Tasselcat
| jaskolka chapter 9 . 1/13/2012
Oh my gosh, this story is freaking hilarious! Could Troy get any cuter? I can't wait to see him go about trying to top Leviathan. Not to mention the hard trying Kraken thinking that a hawaiian shirt is stylish - I just melted from all the adorableness.
It is such a pleasant, witty, uplifting read. It's the third story of yours that I picked up and once again it's a total hit;)
| Liviania chapter 9 . 1/12/2012
I do love how devoted the brothers are to each other. And I'm pretty fond of Volt too - I like that he didn't want to remove their masks.
| Role of King chapter 9 . 1/12/2012
AAAHHH Troy wants to be on top of Leviathan! So Cute!
| blackkitties chapter 9 . 1/12/2012
Oh my! I can't believe troy! This is just to much. I can't stop luaghing...
Oh fu- I love this chappy soooo much. I can't wait for the next.
| I may be too logical chapter 9 . 1/12/2012
Well first I'd like to point out that in chapter 5 you say that Levi wears a metal mask on the lower half of his face and then him and Triton are kissing later...
Then in the following paragraphs I think you may have written Triton instead of Volt, not 100% sure one the first one but I'm pretty sure on the second one.
"Well," Volt replied, "He thought I killed his brother." Volt shifted uncomfortably at the memory of Leviathan's murderous gaze on him. It was as if the villain wasn't even behind those cold eyes, but some ancient evil. Triton had seen that look before, many, many years ago… only it was Kraken who was looking at him with revenge in his eyes.
"They're really close," Triton said, smirking slightly as he looked up at Triton.
| SassyGrl chapter 9 . 1/12/2012
This story's so cool!
| prostock69 chapter 9 . 1/12/2012
Ch. 9: This was such an AWESOME chapter! I was howling throughout it! I knew Volt had a thing for Kraken! Awwww, he was devastated when he thought he seriously hurt him. And I couldn't stop laughing when Leviathan wouldn't have everyone taking his pic with him on the bottom so he flipped it to where he "topped" Triton. OMG, that was too funny! But then he got very upset when the newspaper called him "slender", etc. LOL!
OH, and I love that Rage is going to make a serious try for Leviathan! I really love this plot turn! I adore Rage. He maybe overbearing and a bit of a lech, but I think he's perfect :)
Now, I couldn't stop laughing when Levi caught Troy looking at books in the adult section, especially when he picked up "His Male Slave." Oh shit, that was freaking funny! Just what is going through Troy's mind? Kinky! OH! Troy may have found another dude he might want to fuck? Leviathan? Yes! And now Levi figured out that Troy is researching on how to top him. This couldn't get any better. What is Levi going to do with both Troy and Rage after him...lol!
I'm really interested in Kraken and Volt though. I'm anxious to know what Kraken is going to think when he learns Volt saved his life.
| prostock69 chapter 8 . 1/12/2012
Ch. 8: I don't know how I forgot to read this chapter but I did. Oh holy shit! Oh my god! I can't believe Triton! He kissed Leviathan! I'm still in shock over this! I can't stop giggling that he actually was grinding on him! And then the ball attendants including Rage walks in on them in such a compromising position! lol. I still can't tell if Triton knows that Leviathan is Levi. I can't imagine him having a crush on two guys at the same time but maybe he does! I think subconsciously he knows but it just hasn't clicked in his brain that they are the same person.
| FlorVerde chapter 9 . 1/12/2012
Seriously. How are ALL your stories so engrossing? I keep favouriting them one after the other; I may as well just favourite you as an author. I have to say though I have a soft spotbfor this one because it has superheroes falling in love with villains. And kraken and Volt! I'm sure there's something going on there... I can't wait to see where you're going with this and thank you so much for rekindling my love of slash original fiction! I was reallybstarting to lose hope. ;)
| pixelly chapter 9 . 1/12/2012
mrahawhawhaw, I love this story! and I love how Triton's not even having a sexuality crisis or anything. Nope, instead he goes right on ahead to researching on buttfucking procedures. lmao.
(and i have a thing for rage ok don't juuudge)
thank you for updating :)
| katana1323 chapter 9 . 1/12/2012
ok. I've been reading on fictionpress for YEARS and never left a review, but you've forced me to. I have nothing constructive to say, only this; I LOVE THIS STORY. Keep up the good work.
| Megsi chapter 9 . 1/12/2012
Troy like Leviathan! I really thought he would of cottoned to who he really is. I guess he does remind him of Levi though so that's a start. But why would he just tell Levi that he did want to fuck him when he so vehemently denied it before?Anyway, woohoo for Levi being all villain-y and stealing the diamond... Even if no one cared. Also, Rage being possessive and shit? I'm not sure I'm down with that... Maybe.
I think Volt either likes Kraken or he feels like he owes him because he might have had something to do with his previous brother's death. Either way, I do love them both.
That is all.