Reviews for Endings
StevieBumpkin2011 chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
It's kind of repetitive is random spots, but, it was good. I liked it :) It was good and had a reassuring feel to it.
AnnieHonson25 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
I really can't give you CC when it comes to poems, sorry! But I found it really interesting... I liked it :D. I totaly love the minitaure "Shut the fuck up! The world is gonna end, and you're gonna have to accept it message in their" :D

-Annie
ThompsonbeatsEllis chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
There needs to be more variation in the language here because the poem is so short. When you have very short with lots of repetition, the reader is at risk of becoming distracted by the repetition and overlooking the message of the poem.