Awwwww. That was a sweet ending. Full of love, but promises of a healthy future.

So sad. I didn't see that coming. :(

Good story. You really need a beta reader to catch your typos, but I like where this is headed.

Im sorry but what? Wtf? Did i just read.

I love it! Will there be more?

Yep, please don't stop, first I read and missed this story forever and I'm ready for it to be back. You've grown and it's grown and I've grown and I'd love to see it flourish. Sorry, I was underneath a different name when you originally wrote this.

Wtf? That's not how that works?

That's the end?!

but I'm gay lmao

When the main character said, "you hate me too now, dont you?" And I'd just like to say no. I'd actually fall for someone like him. I find his type kind of cute. Lol.

aww :( :D

love your style of writting :D really having fun now

Honestly reading this made me sad. Its nit that its not well written, because it is. Its not the direct storyline, because that's fine too.

Its two things specifically. The second to last chapter, in which there is either rape or very very thin lined dubious consent. I'm still not sure, because of how the scene goes on. And as it didn't have a whole lot of plot value that you see definitively I really don't like seeing those scenes.
The second issue I had was the ending. It was very abrupt, didn't make a whole lot of sense, the way he brought his little brother to see all these people being artistic, the follow-up on why wasn't very apparent, Luis's reaction to the situation didn't really make sense and the last few lines seemed to be aiming for some type of humor but were undeniably random, abrupt, and just... Sad.

Don't give up writing. Always strive to be better.

Not a big fan of the ending and Erich's personality...kind of wish Luis had told him to leave him alone (which I guess he tried to and failed...no willpower) and moved on...but I suppose it is kind of interesting this way-more thrill to it. It also left me wondering if they are going to continue their "relationship" even if Luis does take a wife? (Could totally see him marrying a lesbian that just needs a husband to get her parents off her back.)

Gosh! I really into this kind of thing!
slash incest brocest!
where hv u been? I had searching for u around..
Gosh! and the way u introduce da main chara is so cutey kewl!
You annoy with me now too, doncha? Its okay. I understand. lol.