|Reviews for The Price of Love|
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/15
I love it! Will there be more?
| Wonderfall Wonderwall chapter 10 . 10/1
Yep, please don't stop, first I read and missed this story forever and I'm ready for it to be back. You've grown and it's grown and I've grown and I'd love to see it flourish. Sorry, I was underneath a different name when you originally wrote this.
| BS chapter 2 . 3/11
Wtf? That's not how that works?
| Waitwhat chapter 9 . 1/31
That's the end?!
| Guest chapter 9 . 8/30/2014
but I'm gay lmao
| Gay Satan chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
When the main character said, "you hate me too now, dont you?" And I'd just like to say no. I'd actually fall for someone like him. I find his type kind of cute. Lol.
| Nasty-fox chapter 5 . 4/22/2014
aww :( :D
| Nasty-fox chapter 3 . 4/21/2014
love your style of writting :D really having fun now
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/22/2014
Honestly reading this made me sad. Its nit that its not well written, because it is. Its not the direct storyline, because that's fine too.
Its two things specifically. The second to last chapter, in which there is either rape or very very thin lined dubious consent. I'm still not sure, because of how the scene goes on. And as it didn't have a whole lot of plot value that you see definitively I really don't like seeing those scenes.
The second issue I had was the ending. It was very abrupt, didn't make a whole lot of sense, the way he brought his little brother to see all these people being artistic, the follow-up on why wasn't very apparent, Luis's reaction to the situation didn't really make sense and the last few lines seemed to be aiming for some type of humor but were undeniably random, abrupt, and just... Sad.
Don't give up writing. Always strive to be better.
| Krimsyn chapter 9 . 11/26/2013
Not a big fan of the ending and Erich's personality...kind of wish Luis had told him to leave him alone (which I guess he tried to and failed...no willpower) and moved on...but I suppose it is kind of interesting this way-more thrill to it. It also left me wondering if they are going to continue their "relationship" even if Luis does take a wife? (Could totally see him marrying a lesbian that just needs a husband to get her parents off her back.)
| Miu chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
Gosh! I really into this kind of thing!
slash incest brocest!
where hv u been? I had searching for u around..
Gosh! and the way u introduce da main chara is so cutey kewl!
You annoy with me now too, doncha? Its okay. I understand. lol.
| Selena Luna chapter 9 . 8/23/2013
At first I wanted to fucking kill that bastard Erich and understood why Luis hated him and why you started the story the way you did. I wanted to do very bad things to Erich (and not the good kind) when the bastard got married. As of right now I can safely say that I hate him and love him all at the same time. I feel kinda bad for Luis and don't even want to think of all the torturous things that he will have to endure from now on. I can see how the pair works though.
Wonderfully written story and I can say I enjoyed it through the tears and fits of " I'm going to murder that fucking bastard in the most horrible way imaginable". It was interesting and VERY different from the usual stuff you find on fictionpress. I was actually really surprise that I liked it. Usually I prefer the sweeter stuff but it was a nice change of pace.
| TheOnlySexyGeorge chapter 9 . 8/8/2013
I wasn't really feelin the whole vibe here... The story was well written, there's no doubt about that, but I just guess it's not really my style. Well written and engaging though
| Cherry Bliss chapter 9 . 7/5/2013
I loved it! Especially the ending!
Please continue writing. You have so much talent! :)
| Arethusa Cyberia chapter 9 . 7/3/2013
This could be the “Never-ending Story” of two brothers fucking behind closed doors for the rest of their lives. Interesting incentive to graduate pre-med, I must say.
If you’re concerned about spelling and grammar, you have a lot of misspelled words in here. Either get a dictionary or a good Beta. Don’t rely on Spell Check, because although “manor”, “defiantly”, and “fallow” are spelled correctly, what YOU want are the words “manner”, “definitely”, and “follow”. Those are not the only ones. Look things over carefully.
I also have a feeling that Erich and Luis are not going to remain Catholics for long. Was the wedding in a church? LOL