Reviews for The Fate of Kings
Eden Green chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
I like this, the words are very true and the flow is lovely. You might want to change however, 'Yet they are satisfied their every need' to 'Yet they have satisfied their every need', because it doesn't make sense with the are. And as for the last line, you missed 'Or' after 'Else'. Other than that, well done!