Reviews for A Child's Playmate |
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TheRaven'sFeather chapter 6 . 9/23/2012 This is interesting but something doesn't make sense to me. While $3000 is incredibly good for a babysitting job you'd still get a LOT more if you were a teacher, so in that sense it doesn't make sense for her to agree to babysit him. Yes, she got laid off, but it is possible for her to get another job, she might just have to move. And considering how his relatives treat her, I really don't see the motivation for her to agree to it. Oh, and this story makes me feel like she's an unintentional pedophile. |
Lilly chapter 6 . 9/18/2012 AWSOME! |
toolongtolive chapter 6 . 9/18/2012 haha octo-man xD fantastic! oh, poor jubilee :( love the fact that she just totally finished reading it and then realised what she signed up for... the flaws of humans i guess... i bit to trusting in signing things before reading it (even though she knew there was a catch). |
padlocklol chapter 6 . 9/18/2012 this was great i really enjoyed this chapter and it was amusing at the end i can't wait to read more please update soon OMG Octavio name is really LONG i wonder what type of person Octavio will be when he's in his teen's ? hope he's the sjy type that would be sooo sweet anyway please update soon can't wait XD |
Guest chapter 6 . 9/17/2012 OMG I love this story I have been on the edge of my seat for it and it is amazing I wont lie i felt a little tingle when I read it :D |
crissy19 chapter 6 . 9/17/2012 glad to see one of fiction press best writter's back! |
ImInALamp chapter 6 . 9/17/2012 Cute c: |
Enlightened Tenshi chapter 6 . 9/17/2012 Bahahahahhh! This is great! I enjoy how you give each character their own personality instead of just having them there for background. ESpecially little Octavio. *squeals* I can't wait for the update! |
Bubbly Girl chapter 6 . 9/17/2012 Awesome! I love this story! :) What day will you be updating? Mondays? Peace, Love and Happiness! :) Bubbly Girl |
Love in All Forms chapter 6 . 9/17/2012 Great story! Can't wait to see how it progress. |
ninjaowl chapter 6 . 9/17/2012 Naawwww, bless Octavio and his more-violent-than-average nature :3 And tis Jubilee's own fault for not reading the fine print better. ATD Jubilee, ATD. I can't wait for when Jubilee starts to really get to know Octavio better, I can imagine it being both adorable, and exasperating for her :P |
Guest chapter 6 . 9/17/2012 like the dialogue and the longer chapters please more like this |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2012 Hi, Anastasia , how have you been , we've all been missing you so much , waiting for your fantastis stories , and in my case , specially this one , i really love it , because it's new , well you always do original writing , something I can't say about everyone here, ) and because it's really funny , i really would have liked that you updated long chapters even if we had tyo wait , because its more enjoyful and really update is as much as you can because as a i see it's one of the most popular you have . bye bye and don't loose inspiration |
lilly chapter 5 . 9/13/2012 Can't wait for more any length will work your writting is really good |
Midnight113 chapter 5 . 9/13/2012 Loved it, short chapters are always better than no chapters - at least in my book. ;) Can't wait for more! |