Reviews for December's loving spur of the moments poems
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
I really liked how powerful your opening verse was. It has such punch, and even though its not exactly clear why the blood is rushing down the narrators hand (you leave it open for the reader to interpret, love it) it makes since in the context of the voice and stucture. I also liked how you tied everything in with "he slowly is killing me" as your ending. I think it mirrors nicely with the opening, in my mind I see a suicide situation happening where someone's cut themselves i.e. the blood. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.
Marla's Found chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Very dark...