Reviews for 2012 the Worlds end
angel chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Good starting story but this is for kids i don't think that's a good story for kid's but good train of thought
Tailee13 chapter 3 . 1/6/2012
Hey again like I said when I reviewed on the first chap. I love your character cole she is a very wise girl. Also I love where this story is going can't wait till you update and by the way, I'm going to be updating soon! :)
blade12344 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
I saw your review on mine and checked your stories and WOW! It is awesome! I love how creative you are! Your story is a little like mine (Won't tell you why yet, it'll ruin the surprise xD) And I love it! A little bit of criticism though, you have made a few errors like full stops and a few typo's so run a grammar check or read it back yourself to correct them, hope I helped! :)

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Tailee13 chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
I really liked it, it was really intresting i cant wait until you write more. I also like how your character was very smart and confident.! :)
Derek chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Awesome first chapter, I thought it was exciting! Suspenseful! Can't wait for more! I felt like I was in the story right from the beginning!