Reviews for Red Flat Line
Blurry Face chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Nobody wants their loved ones to see them at their final few seconds of life, yet everyone else is sad and angry at themselves for not spending the last moments with the ones that have died.

It is very difficult to do what everyone wants, some to stay, some to go, some to cry, some to run...
sickfawn chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
~you left me speechless, so speechless, and I'll never talk again~ :) (awesome song speachless is btw)
Gravind Divine chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
seasidesimone is right, although i couldn't give critsism because there was none to give. this was really touching. I LOVE IT!

interesting-details chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Is it cheesy to say that my heartbeat was speeding by the end of poem? I knew it was coming, but I when I read the last line, it felt like I halted to a stop, and I was still swaying in the wind. Really great poem!

I'm sorry I can't give constructive critiscm, because I am a horrible critic and cannot properly review anyone. I can only do that sort of thing when I generally don't like the piece. Great job!