|Reviews for 020210|
| Reviewer chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
It's good, really. The feelings were conveyed well. No problem with grammar, that's for sure. ;D
Anyway, s'all good, though I think you should try to somehow split it into paragraphs, cos' when I clicked on your story and I saw this really big chunk of words, it was kind of daunting and it rather deterred me from reading.
But I read it anyways.
Also, just curious, the title is a date? Like, I see this a lot: YYMMDD or DDMMYY , etc.
So... Is this a date? Or something else entirely?
Honestly, I liked it.
| Amblexis chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
Why the title?
| AnonymousWriter chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Hello, I see no one has reviewed you yet, so I'll be the first! :D
So I read your story, and since I don't understand love very well(I am not a fan of love) some of the character's feelings flew over my head. Now don't get me wrong, I loved this story a looot, just...some of it I couldn't understand.
Some of this story reminded me of a song called "I Hate Everything About You," by Three Days Grace. But that idea quickly dropped as I moved on. This kind of reminded me of a drama, you know...the bubling feelings...okay, never mind.
Anyways, I loved your story and I can't wait for you to make more!