|Reviews for Darkness Becomes Me|
| Allegretto Brioso chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
I agree with the person who reviewed this first - the fact that this story hasn't yet gotten any reviews is appalling, considering how good the quality is. There's a fair amount of trash that gets put up here and reviewed, and this definitely rises above that.
I'm rather enamored by the opening line, and subsequent events are nicely paced for the length of the chapter.
My only suggestion - alter the formatting a bit? It's alright now, since your chapters are short enough to read without everything blurring together, but if you get into longer chapters, those big blocks of text with only single-spaced lines in between can give you a headache :).
All in all, I liked it. I'm most certainly curious as to how this new job will play out. Good job on what you have and good luck with continuing the story!
| Design Rueger chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Why has no one reviewed this? It's amazing!