Reviews for What Hurts The Most
Marjulie chapter 2 . 12/14/2011
First of, he's an idiot. He didn't even bother to explain to her why he left. Again, idiot. Secondly, job well done. I really thought this was going to be fantasy, but it doesn't matter. I think I should widen my range of stories that I read.
NoName chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
I really loved your diction and paragraph build, however some of your sentences seemed a bit run-on. Maybe that's just me, though. Keep it up, I really liked it! :)
Marjulie chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
This story seems interesting. I'd like to see how you develop it. It got me thinking this would be fantasy-ish because of the whole, "I don't belong in your world", thing. I could be wrong, though.