I am up to chapter 15 so far and I love your story! It is very well put together and interesting. I like how you introduce readers to the minds of both main characters to see how they view and handle situations. Keep up the wonderful work!

I'm so sad that this is over now, bu but I totally enjoyed his story. I find it a shame that we never got to Meet Everett's mom. Anyways, it was a totally fun ride, and id be totally up for the one shot.

Loved it and thank you for a beautiful story!

Thank you for continue to write so beautifully. I love how things between Max and Everett are hotting up, and that Jada is not in the way!

Wow. Stumbled upon your story completely by accident and it had me spellbound! I'd read anything you write. Great characters, fast moving story. Love it!

Your writing style is lovely. I had a very nice time reading the story. There were a few typos here and there but it never took away from the experience.

Please write a Christmas special

That was wonderful. Loved the main characters - especially Max.

Hey, just wanted to say this story was absolutely spectacular. Literally just left one of my favorite anime's soundtrack running for hours, skipped most of my mother's birthday celebration (the unnecessary parts, I assure you), and simply binged on this in the comfort of my bedroom. I cringe with most fanfiction and other stories I come across but I always stick around in hopes of finding gems like this...

But Everett was honestly so genuine, I didn't understand why Maxima was so adamant about being offended by him half of the time. In any case, I wish I was as witty as you in terms of writing prowess. Keep up the good work.

An entertaining story.

A very likeable character you have here. Being someone who has been accused of switching POV too often, I say it works. Keep doing it. It's always good to know what the other side is thinking.
JD Fly

I enjoyed your story thanks

Just found your story...I should be in bed but I can't wait to finish it. Well done

I really like how the development was slow. So many stories with unrealistic romances, ya know? The characters stayed very much in character all through out, but they did develop, which I loved. They were very real and you stuck to who they were. I especially loved what you did with Everett. He was definitely, hands down the most three-dimensional character in the story. Yeah, he had his jerk moments, but he was real and had a lot of good moments too. I wouldn't say he'd be my favorite person in the world if he existed, but he was the best character in this story for sure. I can't really explain it (I really wish I could), but point is, it was great.

There were typos and grammatical errors here and there, but none detracted from the enjoyment of the reading.

Good story, all in all. I read it in one sitting (or well, lying, as I've been in bed this entire time).

NOTE: The whole "follow story" thing is just so that I can find it again later just in case. I don't like favoriting everything, so I generally just follow even completed stories.

and...where is his tatoos?