Honestly, I wrote a story which got 600 views per chapter and at least 5 reviews if I was lucky. It doesn't matter if people aren't reviewing their reading it aren't they? You just need to be patient.

Really like the way this story is stating out. The setting is good and the plot seems promsing -will stick with this one for a while I think. Also no mistakes so far, so many of these stories seem riddled with typos so good job on the editing :)

Amazing story! I don't know how more people haven't reviewed it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Indi x

OMG dont quit now! keep working on it. i love it! DO GIVE UP! PLEASE!

In my defence. I didn't get my story-alert message until 10 minutes ago! And I really love your story!

Hey, I just found your story, but I really like it so far. I feel like she let her whole anger towards him drop really quickly though. Update soon.

noooooooo but they haven't even kissed yet! I need some action lol! Don't drop this story, it really has potential.

hiii I'm sorry I didn't review I've had a busy day and couldn't find time to read till now! Don't give up on this story its a really good story and I really like ill always review it may be a lil late cuz of work and school but ill always review don't give up your doing great update soon love!

hiii I'm sorry I didn't review I've had a busy day and couldn't find time to read till now! Don't give up on this story its a really good story and I really like ill always review it may be a lil late cuz of work and school but ill always review don't give up your doing great update soon love!

For the summary I would throw the words "sexual tension" in, honestly that always gets me reading something haha. I think your title is fine and I LOVE maxima. Eating a salad at a restaurant, she's awesome.

I would love to hear Everetts thoughts about this (maybe in his point of view...?) :) keep up the great work!

Wow this is an amazing story and I'm really loving it! Sounds really amazing and I hope you update soon! I can't wait to hear more about Jada though! She sounds like she's some sort of model maybe? Just guessing :P Update when possible!

I love reading updates of this story! It's a nice way to relax after a stressful day. Thanks and keep up the good work.

This is for chapter 4 and 5. I think you are a lovely writer.

It's been a long time since u updated. Needed some time to get in the story again. I think your writing from Maxima's and Everett's pov is ok! You just might want to say from which pov you are writing makes it clearer.

Nice to see Maxima to be nicer!

So you're a royalty lover? You live in Canada right? Had no idea our princess has worldfame ;)

Looking forward to your update.

Hi! I loved it! I'm not really feeling jada but I love her niece! So cute! I have this question but I don't wanna come off as mean or anything but are you Spanish? I was just wondering because I am and you have the Spanish thing down love it (: update soon love!

I am really liking your story! I just hope that Maxima won't make it to easy for Everett. For the way he treated her, he deserves to grovel in her presence for a while. Looking forward to new updates, and I hope you continue to change the point of view, I really love that! :)