See told you O would review this chapter. By the way do you pronounce her name MAx-e-ma or Max-I-Ma? Or am I completely wrong?

This is really good. It's very well writen, like a professional. And since what you say is true. Cause most people only read stories that have a good amount of reviews. I shall review every chapter. Including the first one.

ohhh interesting and I'm loving the where your going so far ! update soon

this is a great start, even though you didn't like your other two stories i enjoyed them, and you have some real talent. can't wait to read more!