|Reviews for The Side Effects of Forgetting|
| allancaldera chapter 1 . 3/4
Awww Its sweet that they stay together, I thought will was a dick because of a comment but he is not he was just in love of Kellan and for most of the story I really though he would have stay with Nate but I am glad he didn t I prefer him with Will and I like your other title for the story. lol Will and Kellan make a cute couple.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/13
I kinda dislike Kellan and Will, a lot x) Will is way too cheesy and dorky, and Kellan pushes his whole reality with Nate aside for this 'funny' guy. Nate obviously has problems, but Kellan was too much of a coward to deal with them appropriately, or at least try to help Nate out. It's frustrating. Then Will, the knight in shiny pink armour, pops up and saves the day. He's such a goody two-shoes that it makes my teeth ache. Definitely a Nate supporter, but since Kellan feels no hesitation to cast Nate aside for his own convenience, I think Nate should try to move on and find someone who can bring out the best in him, instead of the worst. I do like that they've been friends through thick and thin though. Kellan is such an egoist, amnesia or not. Loathe Will. Ugh, I loathe him so much.
| autums'Fiction chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
Oh god, please don't sue me for harassment if I tell you, that in love you for this! Cause, seriously, I do.
First I though this will be about how Kellan and Nate go from fuck-buddies to boyfriends. (Gah, can you even use the word like this? I really don't know...) anyway, in my head I was already sure I knew how the story would flow and that was okay, cause I just wanted something to sweet up my evening.
Then you introduced Grace and Will.
I love this two. Actually I always hoped someone like Grace would move into the big, creepy and rundown house next door. Kellan is so happy to have someone like her. She is sweet and weird and totally sure of herself. She reminder me of Luna, especially when she made the thestral references.
Will is awesome in an entirely other way. He is easy going in a way that makes him just... go with things without making it into a drama. I felt so awful for him most of the time cause I still feared Kellan and Nate would get together in the end. I am so happy Will and Kellan got each other, they fit- let someone else work through Nates issues ;)
All in all it was perfect in a not-to-flashy way.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
I really enjoyed this, it made me smile
| Lizray chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
Beautiful story! Best I've read in a long time! Best of luck sweetie.
| incrediblectopus chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
This story is positively glorious.
| Preposterous chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
This is one of the best slash oneshots I've ever read. I can usually tell how a story will pan out based on its summary but this one relly surprised me. I love the character developments and how everything turned iut. You tied up all the loose ends nicely too. So kudos on writing an awesome story!
| Sugartits chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
Ahhhhh that was great, as usual! I've only been reading your stories since yesterday, but I've read most of them now, an I'm pretty sure you are my favourite thing ever, so you know, keep writing more :D also, I'm really disappointed you chickened out about the name, that would have been Legend-waitforit-dary! Hah. Anyway, thanks and stuff! :D xxxxx
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
This was amazing. Stunningly written and I consumed the whole thing in one go because I didn't want to stop reading. I was especially impressed with your ability to write real and interesting characters. At first I was all for Kellan and Nate getting together - I was fully rooting for their relationship and spent the first half expecting Nate to get over himself. I thought you wrote Nate really well, actually, even though as reader's, we only viewed him from Kellan's perspective. I mean, he was a complete arse, and as soon as Will was on the scene I was desperately hoping him and Kellan would end up together (thank you! Yay!), but I thought Nate seemed... real. I'm not being very coherent, but I don't normally review (because I usually would only put something like "this was so good yeahhhh!") but this story has been following me around for days now. It was fabulous. You took me on a rollercoaster of emotions - I was confused, angry for Kellan, heartbroken, elated, excited... pretty much everything I could feel, I did feel. Thank you so much for writing this.
| Aria657 chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Aww, I adored this!
It was just so cute and I mean I liked Nate?
But then he was a douche?
And Will is all sweet and adorable and just like yes?
So I'm happy. D
| Trillpuv chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Will and Kellan, the two of them have become my babies ohmygod. THEY'RE SO ADORABLE WHAT IS THIS A;JDKASFHJLAGLB;LAJ;LK I actually kind of read the sequel before I read Side Effects (oops), so I don't feel as angry at and sorry for Nate as I could be... Oh well, alls well that ends well right? :D
| BlaseBlanco chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
I got a fp pretty much specifically to go on a reviewing spree and you're on the top of my list. Your stories and characters are so compelling and well told. I can't express how much I love your writing.
| GrangerDanger333 chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Ahh this is amazing! I was a bit stressed that there was no real tying up of loose ends with Nate, but I'm gonna go read the sequel which is hopefully about what happens to Nate after all this. But aaw, amnesia stories are so cute. I kind of thought he wouldn't remember in the end but he did and it still made me happy and made sense to the storyline. Anyway, wonderful writing as usual :D
| fleurmort chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
I loved this story. It was so incredibly just fantastic! I really didn't know who to root for at first, and kind of now still. I think you did a bang up job with this! You really played with my emotions and I loved that. You made me second guess myself, and best of all you made my heart ache in the best ways. You're just lovely.
| MagnificentFern chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Awwww awesome fiction ! Had a good time reading it :) Thanks sooo much _