|Reviews for Change Of Luck|
| laura Decamara chapter 21 . 3/11/2012
I thought the ending was good...I loved every part of your story not bad
| laura Decamara chapter 18 . 2/20/2012
this part of your story is pretty good...the reason I say that is because it sounds like something I saw in my drems one night..
the dream was that I had a book signing at Barnes and Noble maybe around Jan and not sure of date and this guy I like came up to me and said" do you still like me? and want to date me?
you can use this If you want to...I wouldn't mind if you did...
| laura Decamara chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
i like reading so far...
| Galla-Barnett chapter 6 . 12/20/2011
i feel bad for cherish...aiden, be a man and make a move!...lol, please update soon
| Galla-Barnett chapter 4 . 12/12/2011
i like it...please update soon
| starlightsand chapter 2 . 12/10/2011
First of all, I love it! Secondly, I like Aiden. There isn't much of him in this chapter, but he seems to be a nice guy. One thing that could help your story be slightly easier to read is if you had paragraphs and spaced the dialogue. Like,
"Pretty name," he said.
"Thanks," she replied.
It's just a suggestion. Other than that, it's an awesome story, and I can't wait until chapter three!
| starlightsand chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
Love it! Please continue.