|Reviews for In Tatters|
| Dark Blue Lover chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
Great work on this! I can feel the rebellion. Relatable, in a way.
I'd have to complain about the punctuation, but since it's a song (and I'm imagining metal style) I can't complain. In fact, it adds to the message to have those strange breaks in the middle of a sentence. Love the second stanza from the last - has that rebellious hope, if you know what I mean. Brilliant job! Keep writing :)