|Reviews for Elementia|
| Shadowdawn199 chapter 14 . 1/3/2013
Good story. You have the right idea, but you go too fast. Take a couple more chapters to introduce everyone, instead of one each chapter. And try not to make the pairings completely obvious even without the fortune teller. It is a very good story, but it's way too fast.
| Flash1717 chapter 1 . 12/12/2012