lets hope i never meet the creepy lady who not only takes a blindfold and a gag with her to the bathroom, she takes KNOCKOUT drugs with her...0.o

good, but u do realise u cant have a "faint pink blush like lavender" ...because lavender is purple :)

i love love love it when all someone says in a sentence is uh! like seriously! omg i just had a shitload of chocolate mousse so im going CRAZZZYYY!

good, but i dont think ANYONES kids are rich enough never to have seen the outside world before...they have a tendancy to be rebbelious, which usually means they'll try to do things that "rich" kids dont do. i know from personal expierience. and how does her wearing areopostale or watev make ace automatically know she's been shut in her whole life in a mansion somewhere? didn't she go to highschool? the writing is good, but the realistic factor leaves something to be desired.

I LOVE ACE!

great story!

This is probably too late in the story, but I was wondering if somewhere in the story you could add like a flashback to when she lived with her foster parents? Or even in the sequel, if that's easier... just something to think about!

Interesting chapter... -shakes head- Ace is a perv. If he was real I would somehow track him down and slap him for getting Mari preggers. Also Happy Graduation!

Stupid cliffy. Good chapter. Used up time. Needs to get a life besides hanging out with fictional characters O.o

Drunk Mari perverted Ace uh oh

You better update soon.. Or I'll have to get inner to haunt you somehow... O_o

Cool

Awwwww... I was mad at Ace for not listening but he's so pitiful you can't help but forgive him...

yaay! A chapter!

im sorry, but this has been bugging me... whats PDA? :l :L