Reviews for The Finding
Guest chapter 2 . 12/22/2012
blade12344 chapter 2 . 1/25/2012
Okay, this is a brilliant story, great storyline. Unlike any other I've seen tbf but there's a problem, you keep going from first person to third person and it's really confusing. Try to stop this from happening and just stay on 1 point of view. Other than that it's really good! :D
Madde.LH14 chapter 2 . 12/24/2011
I really like the suspense in this story. My only suggestion is to have more action and talking less explaining.
Wicki chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
Dude, what? The kid finds a dead body and the brother's like "Oh haha wow it's real!"
The L33t One chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
well this seems like a great potential for a story. One thing though, I thing you should rated it K or T. Just saying, this isn't the thing you would read to a little kid
Madde.LH14 chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
I like this story a lot, the characters have well develope personalitys, and the plot is interesting. Can't wait to see what happens next review soon :)