Reviews for End Point
Guest chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
There is a fan fiction literally word for word of this story but with switched names. Gakuen alice. It is .
Nance chapter 21 . 7/6/2014
Great Great story. I couldn't stop reading until I finished it.
Nance chapter 6 . 7/6/2014
Love this story! Can hardly wait to read each chapter.
Very well written.
Thank you.
Guest chapter 20 . 4/13/2014
So I read this story a few weeks ago and I wanted to read it again but I couldn't find it anywhere! It was literally driving me crazy because it was one ofy favorite stories but I could remember anyone's names besides Ash. Anyways, I remember the scene when Ellis is driving because she needed to feel in control. So in Google I typed in, 'he stared at her wondering when she got so strong fictionpress' A lot of shit popped up and on fan fiction your story END POINT came up. At first I thought someone plagiarized your story but then I realized their story was published first. And you copied. So I was like wanting to tell you that someone stole your story but the not wanting to tell you because I loved it and I didn't want you to take it down. But I was so thankful to read your authors note saying that it was you who wrote that story also lol this is a long review but anyways I love the story and I think you are a very good writer. People reviewing keep saying there were a few mistakes but who gives a shit, all together, it was amazing.
Guest chapter 6 . 3/1/2014
Great story! Keep up the good work!
Abbey chapter 21 . 2/18/2014
This was such an enjoyable read! I was planning to read only a couple of chapters at a time, but I just couldn't stop (well, I only stopped when I had classes to attend, haha).

The pacing was a bit too fast for my taste (although this could be due to me quickly going to the next chapter), but I like how everything was resolved. I'm really glad that Ash is in a relationship. It'd be heartbreaking if he stayed in love with Ellis. And that conversation in the epilogue was adorable!
belle chapter 21 . 2/16/2014
Ash really pulled at my heart strings, dare I hope for his story...happy ending of course...he deserves it, also Vince.
Guest chapter 20 . 8/12/2012
You are a wonderful writer you should be published I will by your books.
the girl with no log in chapter 20 . 6/7/2012
I loved this!

I would have reviewed each chapter individually but i was totally engrossed and didn't want to stop reading.

I love how you didn't have Ellis bounce back to being the same as she was prior to her kidnapping yet she wasn't a total hopeless case.

I loved the way you had Adam and Ash learn to deal with her vulnerable yet stubborn and quite independent state.

I liked the way the other members of the team kind of rallied around and took up protective roles from a distance - this helped to keep it realistic in terms of her still have trouble letting people in.

To put it simply... I LOVED IT!
drizzelafterdawn chapter 20 . 5/21/2012
okay finally read the piece off. be true it could have been more exciting and interesting with a great deal of action. the drama was too much drama i guess and frankly your story started off with a really high point but lost that element in the end. i know my review is late and too much saying after reading bits of the chapter so ill sum it up. i like your vocabulary and that element of interest you kept, although it got drained in the end. i have no intention to accuse you or anything,so nice story :)
lionkinglover3 chapter 17 . 4/14/2012
awesome story
Rena chapter 20 . 2/28/2012
Amazing story! I love it!
Jabberwacky chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
This is good, but I'm a little confused as to why she hates him if he's the one who saved her life.
use.less.woman chapter 20 . 2/21/2012
Great job! Great finish! I love that Ellis handled herself. I love that they got a happily ever after ending. and I love that Ash moved on and is happy. I love what you have done here. This is an awesome story.
NYR chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
On FictionPress, I've seen the name Ellis being used as a Girl's name more often than a guy's. (snicker)
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